Kate ([info]kate_nepveu) wrote,
@ 2005-09-17 09:38:00
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Entry tags:fullmetal alchemist, manga, manga analysis

Fullmetal Alchemist commentary: volume 1 art

I've posted a longish booklog entry on volume 1 of the Fullmetal Alchemist manga, talking about it in comparison with the anime. As I said there, "The art here strikes me as clean and with slightly more delicate, less detailed lines than Saiyuki. The panel layout is mostly straightforward and linear. . . . I only found a couple of additional things to say about this art."

Two things, specifically, both below the cut. 129 KB of images, spoilers for the first two chapters, but nothing major. Spoilers for further volumes of the manga, or of any anime episodes but the corresponding ones here (1, 2, 5, 9) are not welcome.

Images from scans at readmanga.com. Page numbering per the Viz volume.

The first thing is the handling of flashbacks. Minekura tends to use black gutters to designate flashbacks; Arakawa [*] uses a lighter panel border, as so in panels 2 and 3 of chapter 2, page 76:

[*] I did guess right as to the surname, yes?

1.2.76 reduced quality

I think I prefer Minekura's approach; the lighter panel borders are fairly subtle and easier to miss. (Yes, there's a wider gutter after the flashback, but that doesn't help when you're going from panel 1 to panel 2.)

Second, there's a kind of cool transition in panel 5 of chapter 1, page 29; Cornello's henchman has just agreed to make the Elrics disappear, and then his dark hair and clothes fade out behind him into a far shot of a hallway with the brothers being shown into a room.

1.29 cropped

(The fading is a little more even in the print version.) This internal-panel transition gives an ominous effect that two separate panels wouldn't have produced.

Like I said, not a lot. I did look, honest. Since this is easily available as scans, anyone have comments on things I overlooked?



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[info]rilina
2005-09-17 02:05 pm UTC (link)
The FMA manga has grown on me. When the stories diverged, I stopped comparing it to the anime as much and was better able to enjoy it for itself. It's also different when you're encountering events for the first time in manga. When you're reading the first volume of the manga after having seen the corresponding anime episodes, the element of surprise is missing--and FMA is pretty good at surprising its readers/viewers. It's a significant part of the appeal (at least for me).

Re the flashbacks: I think the treatment of the speech bubbles (white text on black) is also meant to convey the time shift. In later volumes, I can think of at least one place where Arakawa, like Minekura, uses black gutters to show a flashback, so I don't know how much we can consider the greyed out borders characteristic of her.

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[info]kate_nepveu
2005-09-17 02:17 pm UTC (link)
Mmmm, it looks like black dialogue + white voiceover in the flashbacks.

And duh, I just realized that the very first page is a flashback and has black gutters.

I do look forward to reading the manga eventually, but not until after the anime. (And today I am going to get a thingie to let me record Adult Swim episodes to my computer for later viewing, yay!)

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[info]rilina
2005-09-17 02:57 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, I think reading the manga afterwards is the best plan. For a brief point I was reading the manga and watching the anime concurrently, and it did confuse me.

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[info]angelhedgie
2005-09-17 03:57 pm UTC (link)
Well, if you're going to record the eps, you can catch the season 1 eps on the weekdays. They just restarted the cycle, so we're only on episode 8 IIRC.

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[info]kate_nepveu
2005-09-17 06:36 pm UTC (link)
That is, indeed, the plan, though I hope NetFlix won't be so slow that we'll catch up to the TV schedule by episode 17.

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[info]kgbooklog
2005-09-17 06:57 pm UTC (link)
Speaking of your booklog, the LJ feed is starting to spawn duplicate entries.

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[info]kate_nepveu
2005-09-17 07:01 pm UTC (link)
I saw that it reposted the prior entry with _Wizards at War_, but it didn't seem to me to have done that with this entry? At least judging by the friends group I have it on to keep an eye on it.

Thanks for letting me know, though.

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[info]bakashoujiki
2005-09-20 12:36 am UTC (link)
(Here from [info]manga_talk)

Honestly, I don't think really prominent flashback borders are important. In this example, Ed is something like six years younger than he is when the story takes place. The text also makes it pretty clear that they're talking about the past, so I'm not sure how much of a visual cue is needed.

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[info]kate_nepveu
2005-09-20 12:51 am UTC (link)
Thanks for stopping by! There's not much meat here, alas--if you've read _Saiyuki_, those posts are very long, and the booklog entry talking about the content of this FMA violation is pretty long too.

I don't know about _important_, but I think that if you're going to change borders for flashbacks, you might as well make the change obvious; the lighter panel borders took me a while to notice. But as I've said, I'm pretty new to all this.

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