Okay, per the poll, I'm posting
part 1 of the Firefly commentary roundup now. Part 2 will
cover covers the series in general, character analyses, and worldbuilding
thoughts. I largely plundered these from ealgylden's
memories, and just organized them and annotated them, because I am
weird like that. Posts added after the series started airing on the
Sci-Fi Channel are designated by a (new).
- "Serenity"
- "The Train Job"
- "Bushwhacked"
- "Shindig"
- "Safe"
- "Our Mrs. Reynolds"
- "Jaynestown"
- "Out of Gas"
- "Ariel"
- "War Stories"
- "Trash"
- "The Message"
- "Heart of Gold"
- "Objects in Space"
- "Dead or Alive"
Episodes are listed and numbered in DVD order. Shooting scripts and transcripts are listed first, then my own posts (for ease of reference—hey, it's my links collection), then other posts in chronological order. Posts discussing multiple episodes are listed under all episodes with a paranthetical notation of which episodes are covered. For each post, I've tried to either summarize or to note the points I thought particularly interesting or that I had a reaction to.
"Serenity" (100) (aired 11th) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/100.html
Shooting script. - http://firefly.shriftweb.org/scripts/111.shtml
Transcript. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/93990.html
[2005-05-01]
I thought it was fun. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/coffee_and_ink/165767.html
[2002-10-04]
Notes that it's a good introduction and a stronger opening than Whedon shows tend to have. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/truepenny/1861.html
[2002-12-20]
Wash is a kick-ass pilot. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/gwyn_r/8392.html?style=mine
[2002-12-21]
Spoilers for all aired episodes, with much useful discussion of how things set up in the pilot played out through the aired episodes. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/85221.html?style=mine
[2004-05-27]
Re: River: "Any bets she has psychic powers or something?" Hah. Particularly discusses the racial composition of the crew. Snark warning for all ofyhlee's posts.
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http://www.livejournal.com/community/mal_contents/1497.html?style=mine
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tyreseus) (100-102) [2004-09-08]
Broad thematic discussions from the first three episodes. Mentions home and journeying for self-knowledge, which I found thought-provoking. - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/serenitybody.htm
[undated]
This site contains reposts of very long and juicy message board thoughts on the series (found by an LJ link). They particularly focus on character development and interverting of genre conventions. I recommend them all in their entirety, even in their weird multi-framed web design format, and will just be picking out a few of the most pointed bits.This one is shorter than the others, and mostly focuses on the introduction of characters. I also liked the way our view of Inara changes the instant she pushes the curtain aside and, very competently, starts getting the now-revealed shuttle ready.
- (new) http://www.livejournal.com/users/the_red_shoes/597121.html [2005-07-22]
Comments on the re-airing of part 1 of the pilot, from the perspective of re-watching the series. Spoilers for part 2 of the pilot, no major spoilers for the rest of the episodes.
"The Train Job" (101) (aired 1st) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/101.html
Shooting script. - http://firefly.shriftweb.org/scripts/101.shtml
Transcript. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/94874.html
(101-102) [2005-05-04]
I thought it wasn't great, but wasn't awful either. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/renenet/4623.html
[2002-09-21]
Discusses Whedon's tendencies towards weak openers and Fox's meddling as reasons to keep watching despite a non-life-changing premiere. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/coffee_and_ink/160980.html
[2002-09-22]
World-building skepticism, impressions of the characters. Was River really not popular (or widely thought interesting, or whatever) at the beginning of the show? Includes confusion in comments over Book's status as clergy. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/impudent_rabbit/33911.html
[2002-09-22]
General notes, including how the characters are baffling because Fox are idiots and didn't show the pilot first, and controversy elsewhere over the concept of Companions. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/eatstake/2393.html?style=mine
[2002-09-26]
Someone who thought it was a good premiere episode! (and points out things I also liked) - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/85254.html?style=mine
(101-102) [2004-05-27]
"Actually, that's the theme of this whole ruddy episode: why doesn't anyone look up?" Which is something I was wondering myself during the train sequence. However, I do get the impression that the cargo overall was your normal freight; add in the passengers, and it seemed more like Amtrak than anything, not a train that should have had special security. -
http://www.livejournal.com/community/mal_contents/1497.html?style=mine
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tyreseus) (100-102) [2004-09-08]
See above. - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/trainbody.htm
[undated]
"Is that what i[s] meant by saying 'show, don't tell'?" Putting expositionity awkwardness aside, notes the solid, established-feeling relationships among the original crew, and the fact that "the characters are 'grown ups' - they don't live that high idealism . . . . They have to live in rules of a world that are very much against them, they had to give up some beliefs, they have to juggle the need to earn their living with whatever is left from their 'do the right thing'."
"Bushwhacked" (102) (aired 2nd) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/102.html
Shooting script. - http://firefly.shriftweb.org/scripts/102.shtml
Transcript. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/94874.html
(101-102) [2005-05-04]
It creeped me out. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/leadensky/34963.html
[2002-09-27]
Includes bitching about the gravity and notes on Serenity's decor. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/85254.html?style=mine
(101-102) [2004-05-27]
"The show doesn't seem real clear on the difference between sublight and FTL." Alas, yes. This is the stuff I'm not thinking about because I want to keep liking the show. -
http://www.livejournal.com/community/mal_contents/1497.html?style=mine
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tyreseus) (100-102) [2004-09-08]
See above. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/misia/720405.html
[2005-05-05]
Pointed criticisms of the plausibility of the Reavers. I think, on re-reading, that some of the points are good ones (such as the time-delayed freakout), but some are extrapolating a little further than necessary. - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/bushwackedbody.htm
[undated]
The opening Calvinball sets the theme for the lack of rules where they are. The ship really does feel like an additional character, with the overall story being the connection of all the characters.
"Shindig" (103) (aired 6th) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/103.html
Shooting script. - http://firefly.shriftweb.org/scripts/106.shtml
Transcript. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/95707.html
(103-104) [2005-05-06]
I didn't like it, because Mal/Inara is boring. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/gwyn_r/2871.html?style=mine
[2002-11-03]
Musings on the fannnish reception of the show to date: "It occurred to me, though, when we were watching, what a lot of us in that room respond to very strongly that I think a lot of fans I know don't seem to respond well to, and that's a very understated, underdelivered quality to much of the characters and the action." I find this an interesting statement, because I loved Firefly from the first for the characters. OTOH, I watched in proper order (and reading old comments from the broadcast season really brings home how much that mattered), and I like understated characters (and I'm not really in any other media fandom, except very peripherally Lost). - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/90669.html?style=mine
[2004-06-05]
Special handwritten edition of snark. She didn't like it either. -
http://www.livejournal.com/community/mal_contents/1549.html?style=mine
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tyreseus) (103-105) [2004-09-08]
Also not interested in the Mal/Inara; discusses the class distinctions and attitudes towards rules; and points something I'd missed: "our bandits become, in the most traditional sense of the word, cowboys." - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/shindigbody.htm
[undated]
Another person who liked it. Explicates the interacting social rules and circles, and the ways they ended up failing: "It was like everybody's true personalities came out in the open, despite all attempts, by themselves or others, to prevent that." Which is an excellent point; I just wish it was carried through further, to Mal understanding Inara's personality.
"Safe" (104) (aired 7th) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/104.html
Shooting script. - http://firefly.shriftweb.org/scripts/107.shtml
Transcript. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/95707.html
(103-104) [2005-05-06]
I liked this a lot, because I enjoy Simon and River's relationship. Also, big damn heroes. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/vonnielake/58373.html
[2002-11-08]
Early fanwank about the Tams being mixed-race (which I'll buy); comments on the unusual Simon-River dynamic. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/fearlesstemp/111583.html
[2002-11-10]
Comments focusing on the sibling relationship. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/gwyn_r/3709.html?style=mine
[2002-11-11]
Include a note that, on reflection, I agree with: the witch plot was too easy and obvious. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/91194.html?style=mine
(104-105) [2004-06-07]
More speculation on social order and status, particularly regarding race and language. I believe I have heard that characters are meant to be truly bilingual, but that the limitations of a TV show mean that the Chinese is limited. OTOH, my recollection of the fancy party in "Shindig" is that it had fewer Asian extras than the dance in this episode, so who knows. -
http://www.livejournal.com/community/mal_contents/1549.html?style=mine
(
tyreseus) (103-105) [2004-09-08]
It's all about home. - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/safebody.htm
[undated]
How did I miss that the entire opening flashback was about how Gabriel Tam viewed family as a series of trade-offs?
"Our Mrs. Reynolds" (105) (aired 3rd) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/105.html
Shooting script. - http://firefly.shriftweb.org/scripts/103.shtml
Transcript. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/97207.html
(105-106) [2005-05-11]
I thought it was extremely funny. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/eatstake/3910.html?style=mine
[2002-10-05]
Also thought it was very funny, with the crew beginning to be well-established as characters. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/gwyn_r/1437.html?style=mine
(105-106) [2002-10-21]
Notes that the episode was more character-driven than the plotty episodes previously aired. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/91194.html?style=mine
(104-105) [2004-06-07]
Points out that Mal in drag foreshadows the further upsetting of gender roles. Asks, why didn't Mal kill Saffron? Good question—has he killed anyone who wasn't an immediate threat, just for revenge? I don't think so, and that's probably reason enough. In comments, it's confirmed that Saffron made up the Bible quotation. -
http://www.livejournal.com/community/mal_contents/1549.html?style=mine
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tyreseus) (103-105) [2004-09-08]
Also comments on the gender role subversions. - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/reynoldsbody.htm
[undated]
Notes different kinds of relationships and forms of trusts that make up the crew and that were highlighted in the episode.
"Jaynestown" (106) (aired 4th) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/106.html
Shooting script. - http://firefly.shriftweb.org/scripts/104.shtml
Transcript. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/97207.html
(105-106) [2005-05-11]
I thought it was funny and speculate on how much room there's for Jayne to change. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/vonnielake/53364.html
[2002-10-18]
Found it vaguely unsatisfactory because it was formulaic. My opinion is that it stayed just this side of the line. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/coffee_and_ink/169387.html
[2002-10-19]
Also thought it was very funny. Many notes on the episodes. On reflection, I agree Inara's client wasn't very likeable, and the actor playing Simon does stretch his face weirdly. Also interesting speculation that Mal might've fallen for Inara because she's unattainable and he has intimacy issues (as I believe Wash accused in "War Stories"). - http://www.livejournal.com/users/gwyn_r/1437.html?style=mine
(105-106) [2002-10-21]
"And Jaynestown did something I really appreciate in a show, and rarely see -- the big "fight" scene lasts about less than a minute. . . . And his inarticulate speech doesn't change anything, it's just over and they move on." - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/91589.html?style=mine
[2004-06-07]
Jayne and River are fun; the ships aren't really aerodynamic. -
http://www.livejournal.com/community/mal_contents/1799.html?style=mine
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tyreseus) (106-108) [2004-09-08]
"The theme of this episode can easily be described as 'What makes a man?'" Suggests this is the point where outside opinion begins to matter to him (see "Ariel"). Also explains River's freakout over the hair in a way that makes sense to me; I hadn't quite followed it in the episode. - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/jaynestownbody.htm
[undated]
"I absolutely loved the scene with Mal and Jayne in the end . . . . trying to make sense of things that really have none, and then just sharing this sadness, because nothing that can be said can really change things. Could Jayne stick to Mal so because of that way he treats him, like he's got some other qualities than muscle . . . ?" That strikes me as a good question, and I'll have to think some more about the Mal-Jayne interactions in light of that.
"Out of Gas" (107) (aired 5th) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/107.html
Shooting script. - http://firefly.shriftweb.org/scripts/105.shtml
Transcript. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/97494.html
(107-108) [2005-05-11]
Possibly my favorite. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/gwyn_r/2197.html?style=mine
[2002-10-25]
Loved it. Particularly liked the color cues to differentiate between the timelines; might be a cliched plot, but the character-driven nature of the episode sold it. Still wanting to see River, Simon, and Book's origin stories. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/vonnielake/55150.html
[2002-10-26]
Also loved it, found self invested in the characters. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/92579.html?style=mine
[2004-06-09]
Distracted by tech details and had a hard time following the visual shifts. I caught the colors pretty early, and was expecting the shifts, so I didn't have trouble with it. -
http://www.livejournal.com/community/mal_contents/1799.html?style=mine
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tyreseus) (106-108) [2004-09-08]
Among other things, wonders if Kaylee's comment that "Sometimes a thing gets broke, can't be fixed." was meant as foreshadowing for one character or another. - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/oogbody.htm
[undated]
Makes the good point that Jayne's flashback is also about Mal offering respect (see above) as well as more money.
"Ariel" (108) (aired 8th) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/108.html
Shooting script. - http://firefly.shriftweb.org/scripts/108.shtml
Transcript [incomplete]. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/97494.html
(107-108) [2005-05-11]
I also liked it a lot, and found Jayne more interesting than I'd expected. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/vonnielake/60170.html
[2002-11-15]
"One of the things I like most about the show is that it is not afraid to get messy and uncomfortable, even this early in its life." Cites the fight with the guards and the crew conflict. Also notes that the "stripping of amygdala" idea makes no medical sense (I am shocked, shocked I say!) - http://www.livejournal.com/users/gwyn_r/4247.html?style=mine
[2002-11-17]
Includes good discussion of Jayne's motives. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/96950.html?style=mine
(108-109) [2004-06-17]
Liked the scanner interface; wonders about the currency exchange rate. Ditto to both. -
http://www.livejournal.com/community/mal_contents/1799.html?style=mine
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tyreseus) (106-108) [2004-09-08]
"I believe that had the series continued, this would have been the episode we would have been pointing to after several seasons as 'the point where it found it's feet.'" That I couldn't say, but I agree that it does play a key role in the development of the crew as a crew. - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/arielbody.htm
[undated]
"I love the whole thread of sleep that follows River's storyline," and that she doesn't know if Mal would have killed Jayne.
"War Stories" (109) (aired 9th) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/109.html
Shooting script. - http://firefly.shriftweb.org/scripts/109.shtml
Transcript. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/97794.html
(109-110) [2005-05-15]
Walks a heck of a tightrope in the torture scenes, but I loved the character development. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/vonnielake/64991.html
[2002-12-07]
Useful thoughts on character development; sets out the layers of Zoe's choice, and the great way Wash/Zoe/Mal was resolved. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/gwyn_r/6902.html?style=mine
[2002-12-09]
More interesting character discussion. Also notes that River's "the one most people seemed either uninterested in or disliked", which continues to surprise me. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/eep1313/231487.html?style=mine
[2004-10-01]
Ten things previously unnoticed about the episode.- "6. Book talking to Simon about the writings of Shen Yu may not be because he's simply well-read. How did I not notice this before?" I thought Shen Yu was famous—Simon seemed to know who he was—and the parallels were the writers being ham-handed. But, maybe it's another layer for Book as well.
- "7. No matter how cool Zoe's somersault-and-double-pistol-pull may look, there's no way Niska's men wouldn't have blown her to pieces as she did it." Yeah, I said the same thing.
- http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/96950.html?style=mine
(108-109) [2004-06-17]
Generally enjoyed it. Found the Wash-Zoe fight to be funny and winceworthy at the same time: I agree, in much the same way the torture scenes were. -
http://www.livejournal.com/community/mal_contents/2071.html?style=mine
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tyreseus) (109-110) [2004-09-08]
A particularly interesting comment on River: "Again, on my belief that the Firefly universe is symbolic of the psychological state of the characters, River describes her day in ways that also describe 'the black' or the far reaches of outer space. . . . I'm beginning to suspect that the long-term theme of the series is that life is best lived in the outer moons, although one must also visit the core and the black to fully appreciate it." - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/warbody.htm
[undated]
Points out that Mal didn't tell anyone about Jayne's betrayal, because they were baffled about the apples, which I appear not to have explicitly noted previously; and that Mal needs to keep Wash awake and alive for himself as well as for Wash. Argues that the fundamental problem between Wash and Zoe is trust, not role-reversal.
"Trash" (110) (unaired) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/110.html
Shooting script. - [No transcript]
- http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/97794.html
(109-110) [2005-05-15]
Yay, Saffron and Simon, for entirely different reasons. On reflection, I think this may be the episode that I most regret wasn't aired. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/vonnielake/93066.html
[2003-06-25]
Enthusiasm over Saffron and Mal; Simon; and Naked Mal. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/herewiss13/25084.html
(110-112) [2003-08-17]
Short comments on the humor. - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/trashbody.htm
[2004-05-13]
"Saffron was a girl in a box, just like River was." This is, of course, entirely true, but my brain hurts trying to decide whether parallels were intended, and what, besides that boxes are a good way to smuggle people onto ships."This episode . . . was all about pretending, and about what one chooses to hide and what they choose to show" (see also
tyreseus's comments below). Specifically mentions Mal's bloody nose, and the layers in Saffron's breakdown in the shuttle and Mal's response. Also notes that Saffron is the best background to the Simon-Jayne confrontation.
- http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/98035.html?style=mine
[2004-06-18]
Thought Saffron should've been killed in "Our Mrs. Reynolds," so not favorably inclined toward the episode. -
http://www.livejournal.com/community/mal_contents/2071.html?style=mine
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tyreseus) (109-110) [2004-09-08]
Wants to know, as I did, why no-one noticed Serenity hovering beneath the floating island-thing. Points out that the crew's grown as a team since "Our Mrs. Reynolds." "After the last episode involving Saffron (which was all about disguises), it was an interesting thematic counterpoint to make this one a great deal about nakedness."
"The Message" (111) (unaired) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/111.html
Shooting script. - [No transcript]
- http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/98500.html
[2005-05-15]
Good, but not great. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/herewiss13/25084.html
(110-112) [2003-08-17]
Brief note: "It's actually a damn sad ep about wasted potential, especially poignant because of Firefly's own wasted potential (though that wasn't its own fault)." - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/99234.html?style=mine
(111-113) [2004-06-21]
Yes, the biology is stupid. Wonders if any character besides the Tams has two parents, in talking about families. - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/messagebody.htm
[undated]
The man running the mail delivery station was wearing a Jewish garment (kipa) and had a Jewish name (Amnon).Re: the catchphrase of the episode: " . . . this was what Tracy couldn't do. He wanted Mal and Zoe to take the ring from him and do for him whatever it was that he needed to do, and along with that, he didn't let them carry him - he wouldn't let them try to be there for him, he wouldn't give them enough trust and faith, and in a way, that was exactly what led him to his death."
"Heart of Gold" (112) (unaired) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/112.html
Shooting script. - [No transcript]
- http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/101306.html
[2005-05-30] (112-113)
Well, I didn't hate it . . . - http://www.livejournal.com/users/herewiss13/25084.html
(110-112) [2003-08-17]
Enjoyed it a lot, the quips early and the drama late. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/99234.html?style=mine
(111-113) [2004-06-21]
Stopped watching after three minutes. - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/hogbody.htm
[2004-07-14]
"What struck me most of all in this episode was the loneliness." Mal and Nandi are very similar, which is why her death hit Mal so hard.
"Objects in Space" (113) (aired 10th) [contents]
- http://www.fireflywiki.org/113.html
Shooting script. - http://firefly.shriftweb.org/scripts/110.shtml
Transcript - http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/101306.html
[2005-05-30] (112-113)
Creepifying and good. - http://www.livejournal.com/users/gwyn_r/7509.html?style=mine
[2002-12-15]
"If you have to have a talking killer, you should always have a talking killer like Jubal Early. . . . What worked so well in this episode was what he brought out in each of the crew he affected directly." - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/99234.html?style=mine
(111-113) [2004-06-21]
"This episode was about River, so how could I not like it, now that she's grown past being spooky frozen girl?" - http://www.livejournal.com/users/yhlee/99733.html?style=mine
(commentary) [2004-06-21]
Not a visual thinker; and "Existentialism gives me a headache." - http://nilly.shriftweb.org/oisbody.htm
[2004-08-10]
Lots of discussion about the title in particular: "And they [the crew] were surprised . . . to realize that they were not an isolated object floating in space, unconnected to the rest of the world unless it's by their choice. . . . even Early himself . . . seemed to not be able to realize that the connection is there for other people, as well." Because, I would add, he is a sociopath. The later conversation with Simon, about needing to go under the knife to be a doctor, is in much the same vein.WRT River: "she's the one to whom nothing can be an isolated object in space, . . . and yet she is the one who, more than anybody we've seen on the show, is distanced and alone. . . . that's what was so lovely in the scene between Mal and River on top of "Serenity"."
An interesting comparison between two episodes that are generally spoken of as the best of the show: ""Out of Gas" with the emotional meaning for things, with the relationships with the people around us and with ourselves giving meaning to the inanimate objects. And "Objects in Space" in the more, I don't know, intellectual aspects of that meaning?"
- http://www.livejournal.com/users/bhadrasvapna/73579.html
[2004-08-21]
Discusses the episode from an existentialist's POV: "By reducing the gun back to just an object that [River] picks up when she comes across it, she removes its power as a trigger. . . . She is overriding the brainwashing that is telling her to do bad things [in "War Stories"]."In short: "Life is a meaningless void, just objects in space. The part that people miss when you say such things is that it doesn't have to remain that way. That is where our power rests."
- http://www.livejournal.com/users/sdwolfpup/103570.html?style=mine
[2004-11-17]
The title "makes me think of physics, of motion, of the effect of resistance and the various moments of resistance (and lack of it) all throughout."Asks whether Book was talking to River or to Jayne. I think neither, myself, but it's interesting to wonder.
- http://www.livejournal.com/users/sdwolfpup/158295.html?style=mine
[2005-05-05]
"I think Jubal Early underwent the same type of brain manipulation that River did. He could have been the first generation of it, so he was extra-screwed up as a result of trial and error." Also, "my hypothesis is that she's actually somehow directly talking to Kaylee's mind when she first says her name, and then is on comms afterward. But I have nothing to back that up."
"Dead or Alive" (unfilmed episode script) [contents]
- http://www.livejournal.com/users/kate_nepveu/98500.html#comments
[2005-05-15]
The existence of this script was brought to my attention bycheshyre in comments to my post on "The Message." There's a fair bit of thematic overlap.
- http://www.livejournal.com/users/maric23/13806.html
[2005-05-16]
Notes that the portrait of the Alliance is more mixed in this script. I'm not sure I agree with the apparent conclusion that Simon deliberately killed the Alliance commander; I read it as he couldn't be sure that he didn't subconsciously overlook the problem or hold back.